Haggard Faces part 19

part 20 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2018/01/haggard-faces-part-20.html


part 18 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/11/haggard-faces-part-18.html

The last wash up programs sync in new order files. Updates complete, the one who seems to frown adjusts perception filters. scanning around trace in web wires the cramp metal hulls conjoin towards the cockpit. Straining its neck the others tower above in their seats. the one who seems to frown rushes at them .

“We haven't been operated on and why am I the size of a stump!”

Haggard Faces part 18

part 19 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/12/haggard-faces-part-19.html

 

part 17 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/10/haggard-faces-17.html

Bare but orderly, the labs chairs are stack beside the tables pushed to the back wall. The robots stare as the man wiggles his neck to get more air.

“Why, he just does body enhancements?” the one who seems to smirk says.

“I'd ask you the same thing.” the man said.

The one who seems to sneer rams him into a wall. “I will not leave empty handed. Take us to the arsenal!!!” pass more halls, a door, and bullet resistant cases. they steal the weapons.

“Thank you.” the one who seems to smirk says as the one who seems to sneer knocks him unconscious.

Haggard Faces part 17

part 18 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/11/haggard-faces-part-18.html

part 16 is here:  http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/09/haggard-faces-16.html


As they process the information the one who seems to smirk says.

“What now?”

“quiet,” the one who seems to sneer lightly tightens its grip. “ I need to think.”

the clones pass through a door.

“is that it?” the one who seems to smirk says. The man nods.

the one who seems to sneer drags him to a touch screen beside the door. “Make sure their all accounted for.”

it leans over watching his every move, the man checks. “Their all there.”

“lock them in.” after a few minutes the man says.

“It's done.”

“good.” the one who seems to sneer says. “take us to the lab.”

Haggard Faces part 16

Part 17 is Here:  http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/10/haggard-faces-17.html

Part 15 is Here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/08/haggard-faces-part-15.html

They step in pace with the clones.

“its nice to meet you doctor...” the one who seems to smirk says.

“I'm not a doctor.” the man reply.

“What do you mean!” the one who seems to sneer tightens its grip.

“Look I'm just house sitting!”

The one who seems to sneer lightly loosens its hold. “Where is he?”

“I don't...” the man huff gasp breaths. “all I know is, this doctor got suck into some top secret shit. They took em along with everything in the lab.”

“What!” the machines say in unison nearly bumping into the clones.

Haggard Faces part 15

Part 16 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/09/haggard-faces-16.html

Part 14 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/07/haggard-faces-part-14.html

The roundels dissipate as his gray eyes stare at them. His features furrow into a snapping shock.

“I'm being held by a couple of copperheads!” the one who seems to sneer starts throttling him.

“St...” the one seems to smirk falls silent as the clones weapons aim at them.

“Call em off!” the one who seems to sneer says.

“follow protocol 583.” the man said. The clones lower their weapons floating away.

“Where are they going?” the one who seems to sneer says.

“to their quarters.”

“take us there.”

Haggard Faces part 14

part 15 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/08/haggard-faces-part-15.html


Part 13 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/06/haggard-faces-part-13.html

The one who seems to sneer wraps its arm round his neck. The man screams childishly while wriggling his hands to aim before firing the air. The shadows inch closer as the one who seems to smirk softly pats him saying.

“its alright, if you do what we say you wont die!!!”

“now get offline!!!” says the one who seems to sneer.

“but I'm almost at level 48!” the man said.

“I said now!!!!”

What Doctor Who's new showrunner should do

Now that Moff's final season is over, I think its high time to write about what Chibnall should do as show runner. But before I begin I think there needs to be a clear understanding of what Doctor who is. Doctor Who is a family scifi anthology series where we see the doctors many different adventures through space and time. With that, lets begin.

MULTI PART STORIES

in the classic series they had multi part stories, classic fans obviously want something similar with the new show but season nine prove that the writers have no idea how to do a two or three parter. for the record I'm all for two or three part stories but forty five minutes isn't the main problem here. What is? The writing. Speaking of which...

SHOWRUNNER

The number one problem with the use of a show runner is that one person writes half a season. So two things I suggest, first let the show runner write a single story for the middle of the season. Second stop using the shopping list technique just let writers write if its good make an episode if not don't. Speaking of which.

CHANGE THE WRITING STAFF

  If you can get promising writers from shows like Black Mirror or establish writers from Doctor Who's Big Finish audios, comics, or novels; do it. Even if you have to get up and coming writers that know how to write; do it. please stop using the same mediocre writers that have been here for the last ten seasons, I'm looking at you Mark Gatiss and Toby Whithouse.

WHAT NOT TO DO

no previous elements/continuity from previous eras of the show, no earth or our solar system, no present day young attractive female human companion, no comedic sidekicks, no season arcs, no absurd plot twists, no melodramas, no elements that exclude science fiction, no shaky cam, no sonic screwdriver, no fairy tales, no one lives forever, and no conventional story formulas.

WHAT TO DO

Do write original scifi stories that are unconventional and do use the Tardis and the doctor. Essentially the only elements that should be present next season.

FORMAT

IF I could change the format of the show this is what I would do. the structure would have three multi part stories along with single episodes in between but the stories of said season would all be in space at different times and locales. They be many differing cultures and species and none of them would look similar to each other or to our earth. So it makes sense that our companion is an alien tribal warrior

that's doesn't look like this

                                                                           but like this.
                                                                   

None of the stories will be similar to each other for it would work like Jon Pertwee's seventh season but grounded in far out space than present day earth.

IN CONCLUSION

If all else fails and you're stories either suck or are mediocre scrap em and adapt. There's a multitude of brilliant big finish audios, novels, and comics to chose from. there is no reason to make this show lame. I mean you can go anywhere in space and time.

p.s. Only stay as show runner for three to four seasons at most and if you have to have a romantic subplot don't let it be with the doctor instead have it between two companions for example have a woman from the dark ages fall in love with an alien that doesn't look human from a far flung future. Also get rid of Murray Gold as composer and hire the composers from Big Finish.

Haggard Faces part 13

part 14 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/07/haggard-faces-part-14.html


part 12 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/05/haggard-faces-part-12.html

blinded by gold gleaming roundels seemingly imprinted as though a part of his flesh the eyes scroll along the room before his finger fires at a blank wall.

“what kind of implant is that?” the one who seems to smirk says.

The one who seems to sneer looks aghast “ how can you not know what that is?”

“well... um.”

“it's a multi entertainment holographic implant or MEHI for short.”

motioning shadows catches the sight of the one seems to sneer.

“Quick get him!” they lunge at the man.

Haggard Faces Part 12

part 13 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/06/haggard-faces-part-13.html

Part 11 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/04/haggard-faces-11.html

The footsteps stop. In the distance a whispers utter.

“they're here.” appearing behind the wall a finger triggers the air as another hand holds it steady. Before a young man charges forward ducking in the middle of the hallway as though hidden from a large object.

“He's insane!” the one who seems to smirk says.

the one who seems to sneer shakes his head.

“Look at his eyes.”

Haggard Faces part 11

Part 12 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/05/haggard-faces-part-12.html

Part 10 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/03/haggard-faces-part-10.html

Crisp tinted twists of melting metal litters the room a piece that's still whole slowly rises before plummeting, the machines climb up avoiding the debris.

“we made it,” says the one who seems to smirk “even the circuits are okay but statistically...”

“Shut up.”the one who seems to sneer said “we need to stop these defenses not blabber on about useless information!” with a wave of its one good arm they move on. It wasn't far when a patter of feet approach.

“Where do we hide?”says the one who seems to smirk.

the one who seems to sneer replies.“we stay here, its time to face them.”

????????????????????????????

In the middle

of the bed

a ripple lake

sperms a spitting

fountain

where bills swim

in ice cream.

flabby reds

in dried bubbles

unlayer a fiddles

string imprinted

by a paperweight

wrought in iron.

Ducks Hit the drums

faeries pluck the strings

berries blow the pipes,

let moody dragons

play the blissful

woodwinds

astray.

Haggard Faces part 10

Part 11 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/04/haggard-faces-11.html

part 9 is here:  http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017_02_01_archive.html

 

They ran before blinking red brimming lasers slice through the hall.

"I cant take much more of this.” the one who seems to smirk mutters, A hissing blare echoes, glancing back a massive wave of firepower rockets toward them.

“Run!” the one who seems to sneer glides them through, missiles explode within the hallway as vents suck out the blaze.

Haggard Faces part 9

part 10 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/03/haggard-faces-part-10.html

part 8 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017_01_01_archive.html

a rushing boom splinters part of the dice's roof as all three crash inside a round metal hallway, seeming to bounce their parts slip. Slowly two of them trudge upwards as automated voices repeat.
"engines adjusted, intruders alert..."
the one who seems to sneer says.
"lets move."
"what about..." the one who seems to smirk points to the one who seems to frown's crush body.
"leave it!"
the one who seems to smirk looks back. "Wait," it digs through the components. "its memory circuits are still functional."
"ugh... then grab it and lets go!"

Haggard Faces Part 8

part 9 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2017/02/haggard-faces-part-9.html

part 7 is here: http://randomblog1w.blogspot.com/2016/12/haggard-faces-part-7.html

 

Pulses in their systems surge above the platform. The one who seems to frown manages to grip the number 3 as the others grab hold of each other. The number begins to burst hissing blazing heat scorching its slipping hands.
 a clone misfires. Hitting another engine electric sparks burn as the dice rolls swirling in uneven shifts the one who seems to frown loses its grip as they fall above the swirling dice.